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Radiant static drifts from the radioactive aura of the television.
Diminishing my pupils to pinholes of perception.
Bleeding the captions of the ten o'clock news with the dreams of death i see forthcoming.
War...War...War
Blah blah Blah...
Buy your American flags and your "Fuck Muslim" Bumper Stickers...


Layers of reality melt away as the hours count away like minutes.
Infomercials cloud the path of perception.
Breaking concentration into small fragments of space and time.
Spilling the contents of human comprehention all over the surrounding landscape.
Blood streaming through my veins relaying communication across the "Central Nervous System"

Dial-up mindload disconnection.
Virus found // infected file ..... scaning...scaning....... Corrupt file found:: [Soul.dll] //
Reformat drive /H:/eart.
All feelings will be deleted Press cntl + Alt + $ .

Feelings wash away with the checkings of e-mails from unknown person[s].
Fiber-optic suicide televised for the whole world to see on some FOX "[non]Reality" show.
5000 channel Martha Stewert home shopping network third world workshop.
Dimond ring blowjob debt card purchase.
International Genocide bombing caught in 90 mhz of pure chaos available on DVD and VHS.

In an antagonist world Reality is parallel to Fiction plagued by insomnia.
Where the Paradox of human emotion becomes coinsided with material idolization.
When war is forseen with the republicans eye.
Fought by the red white and blown apart children of America.

What a world we live in...
©2003-2009 ~everytimeidie
:iconeverytimeidie:

Author's Comments

In a world where technology and power rule and has no room for analization... What happends when we analize.
When we lose all hope and bomb silicon Vally.
Push Control Alternate Delete 500 times till the world stops responding...

What happends then...

What are we left with

There maybe some Grammar Errors but hey... Shit happends

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:iconfallingskies:
Fiber-optic suicide - i think htis is the best you've ever written...
my god man.. +fav! i love you =) (Smile)
piece..
Heart

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Skye
:iconsausagelips:
You're a smart kid, man. I really dig the imagery and the stance you've taken. We have a lot in common, my friend, stay aware. Every Time I Die is a great band, too. New album soon. Not to assume you don't like them already, but check out Botch, Burnt By The Sun, Isis, As The Sun Sets, and Creation Is Crucifixtion. Good, intelligent heavy music is the key to intelligent anger, my friend. Keep in touch, I dig your work.

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Wet Slit And A Bottle Of Whiskey
:iconthe-lofd:
sorry that i have not yet read your poem, however i just had to comment on that pic u upload with it, its freakin awesome!!!

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the-LofD aka KonstantinG
:blahblah:
:ignore:
stop by my gallery! [link]
since we all are strange, does it make us normal?
:iconsunrunner68:
This is totally awesome! I'm utterly speechless. I tried to pick out a line or two that I really liked... but it all meshes so well together.... And the message! Brilliant writing, my friend!

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I challenge thee ~ photo-challenge
:iconeclipz04:
Jawdrop

I love how you inserted computer language into it, its obviously an awesome part of this poem.

Horrible part.. is its so true it makes me want to hurl. but we can't really do anything to stop it.. unless we nuke ourselves. then maybe...

this is a fav for sure.

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"There is no greater evil than men's failure to consult and to consider." - Sophocles' Antigone
:iconclownthug:
this is great i love it. i'm going to have to check out the rest of your stuff! great work
:iconfishwife:
Fantastic poem, no doubt about that. Stunning, insightful, true, disturbing...I could go on.

Don't agree with eclipz04 though--- you can do something to stop... take some citizen, rally, protest, demonstrate, make bumper stickers, do whatever it takes [this poem is a great start] to get your government to listen. In a society where presidents are elected by flying brightly coloured baloons and photo-op handshakes, with 2.4 kids and regular church attendance..... politicians can't afford to ignore public opinion--- change the opinion, change the world.

Here endeth pompous lecture.
:iconubetyourboots:
This is one of the best socio-political poems I've read on DA so far--excellent work! This is probably the best line I've read all week:
"Dimond ring blowjob deb[i]t card purchase."
This line is so fucking cool--you have no fucking idea. And when I see really fucking cool shit, I start to swear a whole goddam motherfucking lot--

Was I just doing it? Shit....

I think the last line's gotta go--it takes away from the rest of the poem; that's the gamble you take when you end poems on a one-liner. If you ended the poem on the line, "Fought by the red white and blown apart children of America," that would be PERFECT. It would make such a strong, blow-to-the-stomach ending...TRUST me.

GREAT job!!! Ube.
:iconloxy:
wow...very thought provoking and powerful. i love how you interlink technology and war...it's great. very very nice work! +fav

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"in the presence of fools, we throw days away like paper napkins..."
-Charles Bukowski

~~Pooka~~
:iconsmokeyjoe50:
Nice work, normally im not a fan of poetry without rhyme, but this really works. Carry on writing.

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